My Rating: 2 hearts
Thoughts
on the Novel: Perfected by Kate Jarvik Birch was a book that ended up on my radar because of its interesting
premise. Unfortunately, the execution was lacking, and more depth was needed
from both the characters and the plot.
It was really hard for me to care
about what happened to the characters because they had such little personality.
Ella, for example, doesn’t even think about how limiting her
life is until she’s told so by an activist ... and then continues to make no attempt to change her way of living. Only when her romance
is threatened does Ella decide that she wants out.
I found the romance to be cheesy
and totally insta-love. Spoiler alert: What seventeen-year-old would give up family,
money, and security to be with someone who’s illiterate and knows nothing about
the real world?! It also needed more clarity because it just seemed that out of
nowhere, Penn went from not being able to stand Ella to being in love with her.
The worldbuilding could have been
expanded upon as well because there was no context for how and why the United States
would pass laws allowing people to own genetically engineered humans as pets.
Nor did I think it was a very realistic idea because why would anybody spend so
much money to take care of someone who contributes nothing to society!
A story that ultimately fell short of my expectations,
Perfected will be released by Entangled Teen on July 1, 2014.
Comments
About the Cover: I would prefer to have a girl inside the gilded cage
instead of just a dress.
In exchange for an honest review, this book was received from the publisher (Entangled Publishing) for free via NetGalley.






















